One thing I liked about the paper by Katie Johnson was her use of quotes. Througout her paper she uses many quotes if she wants to explain a main point in her paragraph. Also she explained the meaning of the quote, so I understood the sentence better. I also liked how she used an example from another persons paper to explain her paper better. One thing I did not like about the essay was the thesis. I thought it was too long and confusing.
One thing I liked about the paper by Brittany Thomas was her introductory sentence. She uses a quote in her introductory sentence to introduce her essay, which was different from the other two essays. One thing I did not like about the essay was in the conclusion she brings a random source to support her claim.
One thing I liked about the paper by Keith Alexander was that he used current events and actors. It was interesting too read and also different. One thing I did not like about the essay was the usage of quotes, I got tired reading different quotes from different people. In page 215 there were about 7 quotes from different people, I just thought it was boring.
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